Tuesday, November 3, 2009

poem 1 from tevin
This is my first poem. I chose this poem because I liked it, it is short simple, and it says allot without saying much. There would be no life if there wasn’t death, there would be no good without the bad, there would be no hear if you don’t have a soul, without you brain you would not have feelings, there would be no cause if there was no consequence for that cause, if there was no night there would be no day without day there would be no nigh, without love you would not be able to hate. It is saying that we have to have the good to have the bad and without the good there would be no bad. It is saying that life is better with both happiness and sadness. This poem has put allot of words into just a few simple phrases.

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